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Grades Don’t Prove Effort  Through my years in public school I was never excited when I had to write an essay in class. I mostly wrote research papers and analytical essays. These essays really frustrated me based on the fact that I had to research and collect evidence to write. I never truly enjoyed whatContinue reading “My First Minor Assignment”

I have watched the movie “Dunes” multiple times and will watch it once more to understand the thought process of how this movie was made. “Dunes” was not widely cherished by many mostly do to Lynches poor choices as a director. The cast did not fit their roles or portray their characters well, partly dueContinue reading “Second Minor Assignment”

Notes on the movie I Am Not Your Negro Malcom was a racist White cop standing on an African women neck in Birmingham image  Wanted Kennedy to assort girl to school to show that the nation is on board but wouldn’t do it  Lorraine Hansberry died  What’s going to happen to this county  “Free onlyContinue reading “First Major Assignment Drafts”

“This is not the land of the free” I Am Not Your Negro is an inspirational documentary created by Raoul Peck. In 1979 James Baldwin started writing a book about race in American society through the story of three of his friends who were assassinated. Sadly Baldwin passed away with only 30 pages finished. YearsContinue reading “First Major Assignment Final Draft”

Research for the paper Social medias impact on young adults How does it impact their mental health? Impact them in school? Families? Friends? Different negative impacts Are there positive impacts? Cyberbullying  Market things towards young kids  A lot of scary things are shown like shootings are publicized and makes kids fearful  Youtube there is aContinue reading “Second Major Assignment Drafts and Outlines”

Final draft Social Media’s Effect on Mental Health  There are multiple platforms of social media, all with similar effects on people. There is Instagram, Snapchat, Facebook, and many more. Social media is very unique and addicting. There are many consequences that stem from using it but at the same time, it is so hard toContinue reading “Second Major Assignment Final draft”

I redid my research paper and fixed what was not correct in my original paper. I went back and changed small errors and wording to make everything sound better and stronger. Along with this small editing, I fixed my in text citations and reorganized my counterclaim. Before my counterclaim was set up in two differentContinue reading “Second Major Assignment Redo”

These are some free-writes we did in class that helped with different writing processes. Purpose of revising The purpose of revising is to make sure what you are writing is understandable and clear. The more you read over the writing the more mistakes you will find.  The first step is to read the paper overContinue reading “Free-writes”